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Vodka- A Drunken Conversation Vodka

"Ugh-- h'llo. Do y'mind f'I sit here?"

"Wow, you're drunk. But feel free; do sit."

"I am'nno- drunk."

"You slurred."

"Slurred? Wha'does that even mean? Slurred. I'ssa weird word, when you think about it. Weird word."

"Strangely, you're right."

"S'not that strange. I don't, wh-- Why'sit so strange?"

"Because you're drunk."

"Who're you to come'nto my house an' tell me I'm drunk?"

"Oh, you're related to Beth Chammings?"

"No."

"So this isn't your house."

"... No."

"Wow-"

"Hey! Hey! Stop laughing at me-"

"The magic word?"

"Vodka."

"Close enough."

"Canna have yours?"

"My vodka?"

"Your vodka."

"Go get your own."

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Art and Coffee Shops Coverby =CatchingFear

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I finally created a cover for this.

I felt like dancing when the idea came to me, because I literally could not think of a single thing that wasn't blow-your-brains boring before. Y'know?

(Unless you think this is, in which case this becomes very awkward.)

Critique by ~xpinkstreakzx Nov 13, 2012, 12:25:08 PM

I think this is a really good illustration. You rarely use such clean lines, but I think that the lines really add to the drawing, especially in combination with the subtle shadow and highlighting you've done.
I gave you 5 stars for originality because I think this is a really clever idea. It incorporates both the art, and the 'coffee' shop really well, without looking like you tried too hard.
I gave you 4 stars for Technique because the floor is not as good quality as the rest of the illustration, which is a shame. That doesn't mean it's terrible; it's actually quite good. But it kind of brings the whole thing down.
I love the quirky little speech bubbles you have used.. It gives a hint of mystery, yet allows people to guess roughly what they are saying.

In conclusion: dis b sum gud shit, yo.

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~xpinkstreakzx Nov 13, 2012 Student Photographer

Why have you not shown me this?
It is seksee.

=CatchingFear Nov 13, 2012 Student General Artist

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WHO ELSE WOULD I HAVE SHOWN

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